Saturday



and all those words you used to say
well they make no sense today
and all those nights we shared
lil broken stars in the sky

22 Comments:

Blogger Ash said...

Was I happy in that past?
I dont know.
Its always been so comforting.

Comforting 'lil broken stars' :)

5:39 PM  
Blogger sophie said...

wow...awesome

5:47 PM  
Blogger ubergeek said...

Death: Where on earth do you dig up wonderful images for each post?

6:45 PM  
Blogger Zofo The Hermit of Wandering Thoughts said...

lil broken stars I see during the day...nice one
cheers
& pray tell how do you add the image as the comment title...
cheers
z

9:31 PM  
Anonymous dj said...

tho i haven't been thru as much pain as u seem to have gone thru in life, ur sorrow jus sinks in wen i read ur poems man...
u shud consider askin whoever this is to read this stuff..
poetry writing is a good outlet for ur sorrow... u're good at this... keep it up!

10:20 PM  
Blogger LG said...

vicissitudes.lg@gmail.com

:)

2:03 AM  
Blogger Atul Sabnis said...

whats with you and weekend poems? why this hope on weekends? write only on weekends!

2:59 AM  
Anonymous LIT said...

And all those words I used to say
I hope make complete sense today
Because if you were to change your mind
All you have to do is to look behind

5:17 AM  
Blogger joey♥ said...

great blog design.
beautiful poetry.

6:36 AM  
Blogger death said...

ashley: have you ever needed reasons to feel happy? Or have you always been confined to sadness by instinct?

sophia: Thank you :)

ubergeek: From my secret closet :P

Zofo: err...but you already have a picture in your comment title!

dj: Thank you so much :) Please do leave a link or an email!

lg: hee hee :P

Atul: haa haa haa! As you command, Sire !

lit: Andy, How you been? i missed you dude! How was the weekend? Did it shape well? And what plans for the week? Take care, buddy :)

joey: Thank you so much :)

8:41 AM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Hi death! Thanks for stopping by my site just now and leaving a comment. I appreciate it very much.

I am taking a look through your posts. I like your compact, succinct style. it is very unique.

Also, I like the images that accompany the posts.

The feel of the site is unique and minimal. Like your work.

: )

10:13 AM  
Anonymous dj said...

hi,
id is,
croissant_7@rediffmail.com...

10:20 AM  
Blogger Manish Chauhan said...

Why this nihilism ??

12:07 PM  
Anonymous kay said...

WoW,something i can understand,,,hmm...sweet,,,man,u know i love ur poems!

12:18 PM  
Blogger AakASH!!! said...

This is one of the best blogs that i have stumbled across.
Thou art brilliant.

Your terse verse, says so much in so little. And the aesthetics of your blog are phenomenal.

Nice work :)

1:27 PM  
Blogger Nessa said...

Here I am, trying hard to be Anonymous!! I should learn from you!!

Thanx for stopping by my blog ...

Your pics go very well with your poetry.. esp this one... Good work, keep it up :-)

4:32 PM  
Blogger death said...

dj: dude!! Thanks :)

nihilism: Cos thats where the wind will take you, when you're done with watching the scenery :)

Kay: Thanks dude:) I love when you comment on my work. Feels good, you know. Hope you are doing fine. You sound so happy :) *touch wood*

AakASH!!!: Thank you so much! Its wonderful to hear you say that. Makes it all worthwhile:)

Nessa: Thanks! Hope there's more to write as days flutter past these stary nights :)

5:55 PM  
Blogger shyloh said...

Wonderful words. Another poet with and awesome style!
Thanks for the visit.

9:15 PM  
Blogger C said...

I like this one - very simple and touching.

9:53 PM  
Blogger Zofo The Hermit of Wandering Thoughts said...

I'm such a git i tell ya...what i meant was the post title...not the comment title..sorry...

cheers
z

10:06 PM  
Blogger death said...

shyloh: Thanks shyloh! You've got a wonderful blog there:)

christa: Glad you liked it :)

zofo: When you're creating a new post, there's a blue Image Icon in the toolbar. This helps you upload a picture into your post :)

7:49 AM  
Blogger Neetika said...

Wow!!
In short you speak everything........
Keep it up
:)

4:31 PM  

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