i dawned on you tonight
like a cloudy arm of desire
as you crawled to my death
this sorry fable fire
posted by death at 9:49 PM
Saturday
i dawned on you tonight
like a cloudy arm of desire
as you crawled to my death
this sorry fable fire
16 Comments:
Now you are flirting with my beloved Death again... :p
this untimely wind is stoking that fire....
cheers
z
You up for some fun cause you have been tagged.
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Guess you have a cordial relationship with darkness and death :-)
Luv the pics on your posts..
WOW!!!
i luv da word 'DESIRE
liked da last 2 posts too(thou i'm a lil' late to read them) n yess,da baby pic...its ohhhh choo cute...!
hey know wat death, my sem5 results r out...i cleared all subjects and surprisingly managed a first class too:) seems like aapki duaa kaam aayithanks pal!
Aaah ! - as always, exquisite poetry...
Excellent 4 liners ! ;)..Keep em' comin ..:)
AakASH!!!: Flirting was fun. I am done with it now. Let there be more love for those who seek :)
Zofo: You said it Sire! And you know all the reasons for all my moods :) Thank you
shyloh: Thank you :) Hope you're having fun tagging all of us here!!
Anck su Namun: haa haa! Hope you are doing well :)
Bohemian: Feels great to hear that you've done really well in your exams!! Way to go !! Hope this is just the beginning of a wonderful year ahead. Take care :)
Parvati: Aah, and as always, your wonderful comment :)
IcEyeZ: Thank you so much! Yep, will write when i feel words within wanting to erupt :)
Wonderful poetry!!
Keep on writing....
Cheers
hey,
been a while since i droppped in...
i get the feeling that u enjoy sorrow, darkness, loneliness and the like...
so u r not all that sad after all...as long as u enjoy your feelings, u r nothing less than a happy man... :)
You get better by the minute... Loved this one... You make death look so pretty :-)
at it again, i see...
your death poetry...
whether you let it go...
or let it be...
every word will be tasted...
lapped up greedily...
cheers
The first two lines made me think that this would be one of those happy ones. Should have known ;-) Been doing good man. Hv managed to bounce back into life.
dark words :) the pictures accompanying your posts are awesome!
dj: i used to. and i can't wait to get back to those beautiful days of solitude and eternal bliss. sighhh!!
nessa: it is as pretty as a winter rose, and as pleasant as a moonlight sky..waiting to be loved. But no one loves her. And so she dies :( the story of death, that was once His love, but now remains the ends of all his creations.
humbl devil: The worth of words flowing down the drain. a few passers by. and a few cobblestones. the ends are near. But will they start again ?
ubergeek: Great to hear that buddy:) Good for you. And those around you. Hope you understand this change and let it grow :)
still_figuring_out: dark words. i dunno. just crappy carpets of imagination. running dry with every tear. soon, they'll disappear like a misty river that simply did'nt care :)
This is rather dramatic. What's it all about, may I ask?
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