I feel like an empty body
Trying so hard to imagine bliss
Waiting for some time with love
that seems so out of reach
posted by death at 11:11 AM
Friday
I feel like an empty body
Trying so hard to imagine bliss
Waiting for some time with love
that seems so out of reach
23 Comments:
I hope you'll be successful in spending time with you're love.....
Nice poem!!
All the best!!
You took words out of my mouth. My feeling exactly.
Profound!!! Nice stuff :-)
Oh sweetie
its there but most of the time i doesent come back to you - not the way you want it to...
the problem is not that love is not reaching u..the problem is u wont come out of ur own closet! i thought u r trying..sadly u r not!
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death,
I hope you find it soonest.
cheers
z
man! i bet these comments drive u crazy :)
Anon: Welcome aboard Bhagwaan :)
"Cannot make myself call someone Death. So let me call you Deathless, since you are simply Love incarnate it seems. And shouldn't be called Death at all...
@Deathless: What can I say! Believe me when I say that from the first word that you wrote in this blog in November 2005 "I want to know if life's worth living", to this latest post in January 2006, with the last line of
"Waiting for some time with love
That seems so out of reach", every shade of sorrow that you have so accurately described in your writings, is unbearably beautiful and makes exquisite poetry - but the tragedy is that it is real and you have and are going through this pain and suffering day in and day out...
And the delight and astonishment at seeing such depth of feeling and love in actual words, is tinged with a deep anxiety for you. Hope something or someone happens to you who will indeed make the love that is directed toward you deathless (yours towards this person will already be so :) - you having had centuries of practice at living deathless love!), and spontaneously make you live the beautiful and happy life that you truly deserve to live...
And then we can all joyously bid good-bye to this never-should-have-seen-light-of-day pain of yours as manifested in this Death's blog called Black Love.
I truly truly hope this happens at once. Until then try and get out of this sorrow by hook or by crook.
Though I am sure that I should be the last one to advise you - :)
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Neetika: aah well,. some things wait right at the end of our blissful tunnels of life. will walk along and see what waits round the bend :) You take care, alright?
lit: We're similar souls. And i just trust you more than everybody else around
here. There's something so ancient about you, like you were my King, and i a consulate at
arms' length :)
Nessa: Yours is the cutest picture everytime you comment. And write some more
will you? Your hilarious posts are a treat!!
Anon: Please leave a link, will you? I swear, i won't spam :)
Bluey: loved your last post. every woman would :)
parvati: am speechless :))
Zofo: Thanks buddy :)
Thanks death.
I tend to agree with parvati. There is beauty in what you write, but I still don't know the source of the pain that inspires this in you. But it does not matter as long as you are happy.
it's only out of reach till the right moment arrives. usually it arrives when you least expect it.
so breathe and live till then.
no?
lg has a point. Don't lose the "now" while waiting for the future. Instead, live now. Enjoy every moment.
love is but a heartbeat away
well, people say that loves comes knocking when you least expect it, so,..one day :)
Ah death, that I fear is true of a lot of us. Unfortunate, but true :-/
Got you tagged !!
Check out my post :-)
lit: Glad you could make sense of it all :)
lg: As you command :)
lit: not sure what i am doing here, where i am heading or if i'll ever go back to days of happiness. just seems so out of reach
cocaine: So is eternal darkness and death :) Beating hearts don't mean much to me. They all say the same lies and all make you run dry time after time. There are thorns stuck beneath, and a thousand tears of sorrow won't rid them away :)
still_figuring_out: i guess :)
ubergeek: Dude, how have you been? Its been a long time!!
Anck su Namun: hi! Your post was really nice!
Trust me, you'll get there. Have faith in yourself. :)
Wow. This is a masterpiece. Timeless. To be read again and again. Each line is emminently quotable, and you put them together so well. The result appears seamless and effortless, yet totally profound.
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