Thursday



i miss you more every day
as the song whips you away
let time run dry
And you and i
we could sit down and cry

20 Comments:

Blogger LG said...

let time run dry...
indeed.

btw, what's your name? i dont even know if you are female or male. haha.

11:55 AM  
Blogger Bohemian said...

i used to think 'time is a pet, i could tame it to my convenience.' alas! i've realised, i'm now a puppet of time...dancing to its endless tunes.

1:08 PM  
Blogger humbl devil said...

why cry???
why not "sit down and try"

p.s.: the chip's still burnt and grey
:(

2:22 PM  
Blogger ubergeek said...

Hey - belated Happy B'day! Saw it on Ph.'s blog comments! Would never have known otherwise. So celebrating, ruminating over the past or sulking or just going on without thinking abt it? ;-)

Loved the phrase "let time run dry"

5:57 PM  
Blogger Ash said...

beautiful :)

9:12 PM  
Blogger Finch, Scout said...

why cry?
why?

why this chronic melancholia?
why this dark cloud?
why this black suit?

why?

shield your eyes,
blink at the
sun.

10:51 PM  
Blogger Zofo The Hermit of Wandering Thoughts said...

I'll gift you a box of Kleenex if you stop crying...:-)

*a little bribery always helps*
cheers
z

1:38 AM  
Blogger temppixie said...

Love this, your pain shines thru, and although it's so raw now, it will be your strengh in time.

2:38 AM  
Blogger Neetika said...

I don't think there is any reason to cry!!
after missing someone ur love for him/her increases.........

12:25 PM  
Blogger death said...

lg: call me anything you please. does it make any difference if i were a male or a female or someone in between?

bohemian: i believe you can tame time, if only you were disconnected with other lives passing you by

humbl: Hope your chip returns to work soon. And why try, when there's nothing left to say but goodbye? And who the hell gives a damn about love anyway? Ain't everybody faking everything everyday? Trying to get what you saw in your mind was yours?

ubergeek: just walking along with destiny. Will go where she takes me:) Am tired of showing her my map. She shruggs it off anyway! Thanks for your wishes :)

ashley: Thank you :)

finch: Cos i feel it :)

Zofo: Thanks! But what is Kleenex?

temppixie: Hopes remain stronger than ever :)

neetika: Its not about someone else, but the you who missed out on a life meant to be yours. A choice of life, that you took for granted. And you can only take whatever is left of you and move on. a blurred soul lost in a smoke of laughter and pain :)

5:02 PM  
Blogger darkness said...

beautiful and ensnaring!!!

5:16 PM  
Blogger Eastmancolour said...

someone you lost?
could be
everyone loses someone
everyone misses someone

and after all that
you'd think
the remaining world would understand
what it is to feel this way

yet
no one understands
nor cares

how strange!

9:51 PM  
Blogger Saltwater Blues said...

Very nice.

Warm regards,
SwB

11:29 AM  
Blogger death said...

darkness: thanks!!

Eastmancolour: i love your name. and you write so well. Guess its a lil safer to love yourself first, rather than wait for eternity looking for someone who might not exist :P

saltwater blues: Thanks :)

4:39 PM  
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10:13 AM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

A sad melancholy. Smoothly expressed.

10:36 AM  
Blogger death said...

Anonymous Poet: Sad and true!

5:49 PM  
Blogger Shivani said...

death . so well written.
Eastmancolour: wonderful reply as well.

8:15 PM  
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8:34 AM  
Blogger death said...

shivani: Thanks shivani! Its wonderful to have you here, after a long break :) Hope you're doing great!

8:36 AM  

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