A lonely tower of my toil
A broken twill in foil
Tossed pages in history
Of an anger burnt in tiring
posted by death at 4:40 PM
Monday
A lonely tower of my toil
A broken twill in foil
Tossed pages in history
Of an anger burnt in tiring
20 Comments:
Your poems have everlasting beauty and mystery...
Seems as if a wounded lover had written this!!
Wonderfully written..
Cheers
if she hurts u so much,
if she makes you feel this unhappy,
if she cannot see it,
if she doesnt understand
you shudnt even be trying...
ur scribblings r ....marijuana :)
!!! "of an anger burnt in tiring" -so very depictive of a real state of a hurt mind, and hence beautiful. Makes my day.
Neetika: Thank you so much :)
you know who... said...: who!? who!?
inverted moron: Jesus Christ!
Parvati: Good for you :)
i'm glad u're considering it history... time is the best healer dude... :)
like u know who said... just let her go!
there could be better things and people waiting for you...
an anger burnt in tiring??
hm. slightly confused.
Hey buddy, nice one. I think each line by itself is quite exquisite, but I don't quite get the overarching picture.
btw, how're you doing?
oh lalalooo.....
sho shad!!!
Happy Chinese New Year to you too!!
And thanks for gracing my tomes with your presence :)
Instantaneous reply? *chokes silently*
Beauty is but in the eyes of the beholder sadly...
And may I dare ask, which part of the world do you hail from?
A lonely comment on my blog,
has inhibited my intention to slog
Unexpressed ideas tend to clog
"Kab appreciate karenge log?"
Nice , very nice.. me likes :-)
:)
lg: Confused? me too :P
lit: I am fine. How are you?
Anon: sho shad indeed :(
Aristocrat: Take care dude :)
Hiren: when you give yourself some time and peace
Nessa: Thank uu :)
shivani: Its so good to see you smile :) How is you!?
rage burns
high
no?
:-)
finch: i dunno
Your poems sound hurtful and sad...and almost as though you like the pain. Was curious though...how did you find my blog?
Aparna
Hmmm...
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