there is a certain beauty in his mind
in the way he keeps everything aside
like a burning bridge of fire
in bottled years of dire
posted by death at 6:03 PM
Thursday
there is a certain beauty in his mind
in the way he keeps everything aside
like a burning bridge of fire
in bottled years of dire
19 Comments:
This poem is good as usual.....
but instead of 'she' u used 'he'...
Ye baat kuch hajam nahi hui
the dire maker....heee.heee...
cheers
z
The image is so the phrases "bottled years", "keeps everything inside"...
You know what? - I think commenting on your poems is moot. Always the same exquisiteness, the same beauty, the same blatant pain, or rarely as in this poem - a latent sense of dire, quite lovely. All these qualifications are a given, so, from thenceforward methinks that I should be a happy silent reader of such sadness, and pass on without commenting! :)
"a burning bridge of fire" is sheer inspiration from somewhere from up above the world so high - not of this world at all...
u seen the film 'dil chahta hai'? this is kinda like the SID guy in the movie...
there is a certain obscurity in his mind
probably that’s why he keeps everything inside
like a fireman watering a bridge of fire
but unable to lessen the bottled years of dire
Good poem...
Neetika: hmmm
Zofo: yep whatever :)
Parvati: sure thanks!
dj: i guess so
j: hmm..perhaps
Vanathi: thank you
this was very beautiful bro. shinE on!
you're not happy with the world around you, but you are with ppl complimenting you all the time?
btw, ive jus read many of your poems and feel that this one is a little different from the others, though you seemed to have finished it on the same note as always!
God Bless!
Why?
now, now, now...
need an email address
mail me @ devil.iz.moi@gmail.com
These are some wonderful turns of phrase.
Especially, I like: "there is a certain beauty in his mind." I would be flattered if anyone ever said that about me!
Also, I have placed a link to your site back at mine. I like your work very much.
: )
Saltwater Blues: shinE on you .. crazy diamond :)
Anon: hmmm
Inkblot: i dunno
humbl devil: but why?
Anonymous Poet: Thank you so much :)
Everyone has some similar picture in their mind. Though reality is contradicting..
Good one.
Anck su Namun: true
I had taken a little break from reading blogs and writing... but....
A break is important
so I can prepare myself
to guzzle every drop of your poetry!!
darkness: indeed :)
FUCK
what a picture!!
sorry for expletive.
but i LOVE the image.
both, the conjured and evident.
Finch, Scout: the expletive is the silent truth of our lives
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