This favourite pastime
of my guilty lover
as the day rises higher
and the sun struggles admired
like a blue eyed boy tired
posted by death at 6:12 PM
Wednesday
This favourite pastime
of my guilty lover
as the day rises higher
and the sun struggles admired
like a blue eyed boy tired
18 Comments:
You have been tagged! I'll look forward to the post!
you have so many blog friends now and are still feeling the melancholy?
hmm.
i like this guilty lover of yours..
again a string of lovely words
cheers
z
i dont really understand this one.
sun struggles admired like a blue eyed boy tired???
:-/
what does that mean?
guilty lover?
and like lg asked ' like a blue eyed boy tired'?
Lovely poem!!
Why do you always write poems & not stories??
sun struggles admired ??
I'm not quite sure if I followed this...
atul: hope this tagging does'nt hurt :(
shivani: it is fading. but don't quite know what i've become
Zofo: Thank you so much :)
lg: we'll both go and ask the sun! hee hee :)
Anon: Am not talking with you, until you leave a link or two. How many times should i ask you to unveil your beauty and let us know who you truly are ! hee hee :P
neetika: prose lays hidden in the closet. They're a lil personal, but will let show them all soon :)
manish: neither did i :P
why shud it hurt? it's a thought - like the others...
I beg to differ .. the sun never struggles. :)
Hi Death (sounds queer...:) )
First time here.
Your poems and blog ...the final irony of pathos...an everlasting beauty.
hmm...still no 'tag' pome...
:-w
lit: its the stories you chose to ignore, remain the struggles of those in pain
anamika: Thank you. but this beauty too, shall fade to dust
atul: i am sorry, i can't do this
:)
my hope like dried leaves crumble
in denial an inauspicious mumble
C'est La Vie
Daeth.
death: Nicely put. I see. Thinking about that.
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atul: Hey Atul,.please don't feel sad. I just don't feel like writing happy stuff anymore. and i dislike the idea of a perfect lover. pure fairytale. simply not true. why go trumpeting about something that doesn't even exist! Hope this makes sense :)
psychacid: hi !
lit: thanks dude. so how you been? How's the weather !?
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