I am the song and the last lie
I am the wrong you can't right
I am the black ghost walking alive
In the fading light between your eyes
posted by death at 6:09 PM
Sunday
I am the song and the last lie
I am the wrong you can't right
I am the black ghost walking alive
In the fading light between your eyes
44 Comments:
finally!
i wanna steal this poem...
i like your song
even if you are wrong
I'm the darkness in the light
'm the rightness in the wrong,
I'm The goodness in the Bad,
I;m the saneness in the Mad...
I'm the sadness in the joy
And I am the gin in the gin soaked boi...
:)
cheers
z
I'm the blind faith in your verse.
the child, concluded. brief. terse.
i am the misguided butterfly.
:-)
beautiful, as usual.
you go girl!
there is 'something' abt you and your weekend poems? :)
Good poem!
Truly Black Death! Perfect. Perfect!
mirun: haa haa!
sophia: hmmmmm
Zofo: Jesus!
Finch: I am no Girl!!!! How many times do i have to tell you that :(
Atul: yes, sundays start so much inside!
Chätul חתול : Thank you :)
Parvati: thanks! how you?
Lovely poem!!
All the thoughts and feelings forwarded in four lines.....
God bless you
Cheers
You have got a greeeaat blog here..will keep visiting(but dont expect too many poem specific comments bcos i liked all that i read)
Hiya D, I'm mad at you 'coz you made me wait.. Heck, but, HOW do you write such nice pomes yaar? Loved this one too..
oye!
you never told me you weren't female!
sorry for the bias, but your verses sound so.. feminine.
not girly.
feminine.
i mean, i know ideas are free of gender,
but somehow, intuition called you a woman.
:-) great stuff, nevertheless!
and i promise, i didn't mean to offend!
oh, one more koshun:
why's black love
blue and icy?
black love is immaculate.
why's yours.. clean?
lol@ "I am no Girl!!!!" ... but I bet there'll still be somebody who says: "Are you sure you're not a girl?"
btw, I really liked this one. You seem to get better with each post :)
deathly!
u made me wait so long for this piece of yours..but i ain't complaining...
supercool blog.
starting today, i'll experience death everyday.
i liked all the haikus, and the pictures do absolute justice.
is it the pain or empathy
i really don know
i keep comin back for more
but as ur verses snow
Neetika: thank you
Shikha: expectation doesn't lurk round here
Finch, Scout: sure
Finch, Scout: i got no idea
Saltwater Blues: thank you
Bohemian: sorry for making you wait
Sujay Sukumar: ok sure
jasir: hmm, i dunno
"I am the wrong you can't right"
ouch.
death: you dont speak much, do u?
:-( i weely offended you, didn't i?
i'm sowwie!
Love Kills.
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still_figuring_out: hahahaa!
Sujay Sukumar: he hee, i do when am all alone :P
Finch, Scout: Nooo!! Not at all!! We're divine dudes remember? we can't hurt each other, even if we tried :D
Anon: hmmm. temme more :)
The pic is cool, like Medusa the Gorgon,whose hair is full of snakes.
aiyyo!
this side is dudette.
so, lets make it a cosmic thing, free aaf jender and yowrithing,
and say "divine bovine!"
*stupid grin*
I am afraid...
Finch, Scout: aiyyo as in you know tamil too!? yennakkum teriyum :D
hmmm....
guess this one's worth the long wait... all the 4 lines kinda mean the same thing but u've put the words together so differently... it conveys the complete effect :)
Lovely blog. Yes death is beautiful, the name and the blog
You inspired to write a poem just on Death
Will post soon on my blog
dj: Thank you. Take care
kitchenette soul: Nice nick. Do you know how to cook good food?
very beautiful !!
all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)
i am the wrong u cant right?
who cares about right n wrong? it all ends anyway!!
how r u..
You can't do a thing to not make it fade can you? Even for yourself.
I am the black ghost walking alive
In the fading light between your eyes
That's a killer! :-) Very nice.
emotions: Thank you :)
Sushma: I am dying :( Save me
Inkblot: No you can't. But atleast you tried
GhostOfTomJoad: hee hee
bLacK Love's not ambitious...
BLacK lOVe's struggle is everyday life...
Mind, Ti's that dreams
Heart, which aches....
Pain and Pleasure rise from
tide the same
interesting!
What's next: Wow! Bullz eye! dude, have we met before ?
Shruti Singh: hee hee
Yes, I am a good cook, innovative create new recipies and poems alike.
Never sit down to write. Write if it flows, if it doesn't so be it. To write the back of a grocery bag or the computer both will do
Never confine myself in anyway ever.
I can cook, clean and write poetry all the same time.
My kitchen is my workplace for every creative endeveour.
kitchenette soul: yummy :D
:-( chAUvinISTic inclinations....
Gather... Ye lot the fair gender
to question the linguistic
partisans of dUDes and GuYZ and HEs of MOTHER EARTH
Lol nice..are the strains of Gin Soaked Boy inspired? Cheers..hic
MellowDrama: Thanks :) Don't think they are. I like the cartoon of your face. Nice :)
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