like the blinking boy of twilight
and the aching wounds of midnight
like the song that never ends
this pain, will it ever fend
posted by death at 4:37 PM
Thursday
like the blinking boy of twilight
and the aching wounds of midnight
like the song that never ends
this pain, will it ever fend
34 Comments:
Have patience dear
A day will come when ur solitation will come to an end ......
Have faith in god.....
Keep smiling:)
you are not letting go? why>
ohhh i like this one. every single line.
p.s: are you really in pain?
Aaah! - BEAUTIFUL! Especially "the aching wounds of midnight", and of course "this pain, will it ever fend". Fend is a nice little word to be used here...
Lovely lines.....after a long time I have come across such feelings....
Beautiful. That was soul stirring!
Neetika: yeah sure
Shivani: i dunno
lg: what is pain?
Parvati: thanks
Mallika: good for you
silverine: thank you
Debbie, is that u?!
Such deep and touching words..utterly painful.
ya...dabble in pain...
get stoned with it...
then a time will come that it's as easy as breathin'
hang in there...
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blue athena... i think dats exactly the reason y some ppl can go on living :)
wudnt u agree death?
dard-e-dost ke bina toh zindagi adhhuuri hain humaari!
pain is where you see it.
twist it.
mould it.
beautiful clay.
see?
its poetry.
pain.
Me wonder too...I love your poems.
Jyothi Kapur Das: Sorry, this ain't debbie
anu: yeah i guess
humbl devil: Yep. sure
Blue Athena: mending an end
Anonymous: yes, of course
Bohemian: dar-e-dost mar gaya
Finch, Scout: plain perception, this battle of pain. yeah?
Anamika: am glad you do
this is somewhat eerie. the blog is very clean though, like the whie cloth.
Eerie I say.
First-time visitor. Loving the ditties. Keep it up!
i think you can write words of joy/mirth as well/just that you need to let go and discover other avenues that give happiness.
=
shivani,
Eerie - I agree.
But, pretty.
...or do I long it to never end?
Came here hopping around..Like your work:)
Thanks for leaving a comment on my BLOG. Apologies for not replying immediately. You've got some lovely verse poetry here... perhaps you should write some in other moods as well, but that would defeat the theme surrounding this BLOG I guess.
It will when you find true love....I am depending on that one. I hope it doesent turn out to be the biggest joke that God ever played on human beings. *LOVE*
Oh, the despair! How painful. But beautifully expressed! You say so much with so little.
lovely!
tony: Oh well. some things just are..eerie!
A fool on the hill: Sure, thanks
shivani: Yes i try. Its the new avenue that pushes me back
Misty: Thank you
Vamsee: Unsure. Thanks
Sriram C S: There's no theme here. Some write for the applause, i write for my foul soul
Ashley: Yes. Hope so too
Anonymous Poet: How i wish i never said anything!
Roshomon: What is? You? Yeah, i suppose
ANother good piece..
Try lettin the pain go..
there's more to life. But u need to see that urslf.
don't we just love to be torn apart? isn't it the most exquisite feeling?
howve u been! i used to think that i had u on the blogroll! obviously not :( putting u there now :)
There is a fine line between pleasure and pain };-}
Blackempress: Yes, you need to keep telling me that. Else all hope will die
Inkblot: yes, but then too much of this internal hurting tends to eat up your soul. and its not a pretty sight..a bleeding soul
Anonymous: interesting..
uniqe.
few xpres pain so well
in few words.
luv ur blog
I think its breathlessly beautiful actually. We see it all the time don't we?
jasir: Thank you. Your blog is quite a treat :)
inkblot: a lot in common. you and me. but then the uncommonness will kill us both. eventually :)
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